问题描述：
谁能帮我看一哈，这篇作文又没什么错误，帮忙修改一哈！谢谢！急需！！
Hongdao hotel is the best hotel I have ever stayed in.Thought,it isn't too big,but many travelers like it.Not only it is very economy,but also it to make travelers feel at home.And service is very great,too.The provision of travel plans and free breafast for guest.At same time,master is so friendly and passion ,therefore,he has many friends and guests. Then,every room is specially and local in there.Because there have much entertainment,you don't care about stay in here is boring. If you don't know how to spend your free time,there,is a good choose.(也许有些单词也错了，也请帮忙修改一哈！）
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问题解答：
Yuan Hongdao hotel is the best hotel that I have stayed in
.Although it isn't too big, many travelers like it.Not only it is very economy,but also it to make travelers feel at home.And service is very great,too.The provision of travel plans and free breafast for guest.At same time,master is so friendly and passion ,therefore,he has many friends and guests. Then,every room is specially and local in there.Because there have much entertainment,you don't care about staying here is boring. If you don't know how to spend your free time,there,is a good choose
写得不错，但有些地方需要修改，可惜莪今天没空了
写的还不错
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