问题描述：
To travel!
With time went by, people become more and more utilitarian and complex. Financial and psychological burdens always perplex most people who seldom relax themselves. Many phenomena, says, death or Depression Disease, were caused by the tremendous pressure in the modern world.
There is no denying that working harder and harder is a necessity if we want to win the battle struggling for survival against the cruel world. However, we humanity are not created by metal, that is to say, sometimes we must search for ways to enjoy the extremely beautiful world.
Personally, tourism is not a bad way to escape form the society which is full of noise, dust and cold skyscrapers. You can choose the traveling manners freely, for instance, self-help travel, an outing, or a tour following travel agency, the manners are all depend on you. What’s more, it is easy to expand your scope of knowledge during the trip, which may relieve both your physical and mental burden at the same time. Traveling is beneficial for everybody's health. When you travel outside, you must walk a lot, so that you will take lots of exercises. You can also see many beautiful scenes in the places you travel. That is good for your eyes.
As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “He who travels far knows much”. what is journey ? it 's a long process for beauty. I do like travel very much, because when you are intoxicated with the glorious landscape, you may really be brought into the nature, feel her and taste her. At that moment, the world is so silent that makes you suspect that this world is only your own.
So, put down your work and go out of door, to travel. And remember, my dear friends, the lift style can be decided by your own ideas, nobody can deprive your rights to enjoy life.
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问题解答：
厉害!
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